Thread:Indigo~/@comment-26010708-20140402005935

Annie - Your usual Dandere character. She has a hunting sort of bow, her magical object is a bunny hair pin! Her magical color is purple. Her main color scheme is black and purple. EDIT:

Her hair would be black in the original part of it, with purple eyes. Probably a simple front bangs cut on her hair. Something sort of like Kuroneko’s hair style. And probably a costume like Kyoko Sakura from Puella Magi Madoka Magica. Although in the second part of the series her hair color would probably change along with her eye color. I’ll list those later on after all of this is read that way you can have a little more context to this.

Danny - Basically he’s the strong typical character, his point in the story is mainly to get Annie’s character to develop more, as he is the receiving end of the Dandere-ness, his magical weapon is sound. His magical object is a pair of headphones. He can basically create giant speakers to blow away his enemies. And he usually finishes them off with two giant speakers. His magical color will probably be yellow. Possibly blue. Depends on what Daniel wants I guess.

Agent Swift - Not 100% sure what to do with her right now, although her color scheme would be blue and orange (Well, that is until she actually turns into a magical girl, as her colors would be pink as she is one of the original magical girls of love) along with her magical powers, her magical object wouldn’t be anything as she is one of the originals who is powered by love.

Ableben/Malc - Basically is a being created from the grief of humans on earth. His ultimate goal is to bring grief to everyone. Not entirely sure about this character either. :P Although I do want to base it slightly off the five stages of grief. See below. Oh! He might actually be a sort of data mind sort of villain. Maybe a villain that’s like Souran and can’t really be faced off with. Something that you have to destroy by means other than brute strength. . . Or maybe he can’t be destroyed at all.

The thing is Ableben might only be a backstory character, someone that is only there to set up the plot and progress everything along. More of a plot point than a real enemy.

Premise idea: Basically it’s a world that’s populated by both humans and monsters, the humans are in a inner city (This might be too close to Attack on Titan actually . . . Hmm . . . :P Oh well, I’ll continue the thought pattern first) and the monsters on the outside. Scratch that. That’s too much like Attack on Titan. Let’s see. ..

Well, I might do something like monsters only come out at night or something. Basically the monsters just appear- Wait! I know! Let’s see. . . The monsters have magical powers and each have a magical token. Basically the government has enlisted various people to help fight said monsters, these would be the love warriors, basically people that have magical powers based off of love. (Sounds corny and silly, but it’s supposed to be a stupid part. :P) (They all dress in pink too, probably frilly dresses. Including the guys. [The pink part, not the frilly dress part, that’s too much like /another/ story that my /other/ brother is writing])

The love warriors are the original fighting squad, they’re magical powers are based off of the monster’s magical tokens although amplified using the power of love (Does this make sense? I don’t think so. But I like it so far. :P) That is of course until the main monsters come, Ablehnung, Zorn, Handel, Krise and Die Annahme. (In order of stage of grief and power). Those monsters have the power to defeat all the magical warriors - And they /did/ defeat all the magical warriors, with the exception of Agent Swift, she being the most powerful magical warrior escaped the clutches of grief and death. Now that’s all the backstory. (Oh yeah, and once you get the magical powers you don’t physically age anymore. :P [Mostly so I can do a time jump right about now.])

About twenty or so years later (Maybe more or less) when the humans have been pushed back into secure gates of the ancient dinosaur magic (Yeah, I call it that as it’s supposed to be the oldest magic ever, basically a safe ground in the shape of a circle with walls around it that no evil or dark magic can pass through [With the exception of magical lawyers, but that’s a story for another day and has nothing to do with this right now. :P]) the government of Regierung (The state name can be Regierung, I dunno why but I am using German for everything here. :P)  had developed a new sort of magic so they can take back their land and repopulate the world. The magic still involves love, but the power of love links to what they love most (In Danny’s case it’s music, and in Annie’s case it’s animals [Or for some reason the killing of animals? I’ll work that out later]) basically it’s a power that draws upon what is precious to them, so the more they love something, the more powerful their magic will get.

Wow, that’s a lot for right now. . . I think I might give it a break until I can come up with more stuff. :P Oh well, until then! Goodbye world! o/ Or should I say goodbye Regierung? :P Probably not yet.

Oh yeah, Regierung was created by the ancient magic master Street Justice (Don’t you just love how I am incorporating The Brotherhood of the Everlasting Apples into this? :P) although he doesn’t play a very big part in the story other than establishing the world.

I am beginning to wonder how I am going to have the whole five stages of grief thing set up, I might want to have it like five different areas or something. Oh. And hmm. . . I might not want the five stages of grief monsters to come into play until after Annie and Danny get their powers. (Oh yeah, I think I might do something along the lines of only teens and preteens can bond properly to magic, that way I have an excuse for only teens and preteens being magical girls and boys. :P)

The reason why I am not sure I want them to come into play until after they get their powers is because then it won’t be very long until Danny dies, I mean I want Danny to die in it as Annie needs something to strive for (Example being that she wants to bring Danny back from the dead) that way her magical power actually changes mid way through the story as she is passionate about Danny instead of her original magical powers, and since she would have such a strong bond to Danny, her magical powers would be far superior to that of anyone else in the story.

And if Danny dies earlier on in the story she wouldn’t have enough time to develop with Danny. So now I am thinking that they’d all appear after Danny and Annie get their powers. So Danny would basically be a second project, after the original Magical Girls of love (Still need a new reason for this to fail) and then when a new monster appears (First one being Ablehnung) he assumes it’s basically like all the original monsters and attempts to fight it as such and dies quickly against it. Annie has to save Danny by taking his headphones away and resurrecting him at the top of Mount. LMBW, although in order to get to that mountain she must face all the five stages of grief monsters, the last being the most powerful “Die Annahme” (Acceptance) at this point she learns to let go of Danny (Because of the idea of Acceptance, so basically this whole story plays upon the idea of letting go of a lost one.) Either that or she ends up getting Danny back from the dead. Hm. Or maybe Danny comes back for a brief period merely to speak to her one last time. I dunno just yet. :P Let’s see, what else. ..

Oh yes! Basically to fight against each monster you have to counter it’s extreme nature of evil with an extreme opposite nature of good, say for “Zorn” (Anger) you have to fight it with extreme happiness, and say “Krise” (Depression) you have to fight it with extreme happi- Wait. . . What’s the opposite of depression and what’s the opposite of anger? :P Oh geez. . . :P I just ran into a problem. :P I’ll fix it later. :P

Now each monster would have magical powers based off of it’s extreme stage of grief. So say Zorn would have a red theme and would probably deal with fire and destruction a lot, Ablehnung would probably deal with - UGH, what color works for denial? :P Green? :P Plants? :P What does that have to do with denial! :P GAH. :P

Hmm, what else is there. . . I think that’s all for tonight actually. :P I must be retiring to bed soon. Goodnight! *Waits for another idea*

Oh, on a side note Malc/Ableben basically comes from two things: Malc comes from Malic, and Ableben is German for “Demise” not sure which one I like more currently. :P

And Annie’s magical weapon would probably be a bow, as much as I’d like to use a sword I don’t think that’d fit in with her personality/magical type. A bow might work more, but I want something more animal related like say. . . Not animal powers, not summoning animals. . . What else is there? :P Maybe she can create giant energy bunnies and ride them! - Eh. . . No. . . :P Hmm let’s see. . . Well, she’d only have her animal powers for the first part of it, that is until she fights against a certain monster (Haven’t decided which one yet. :P) and realizes that it’s no longer her love of animals and protecting them that she drives her power from, it’s from her love of Danny. (Platonic love mind you >_>) (Oh, yeah, she basically sees Danny like a brother, nothing romantic between them or anything like that. :P )

So after that point she actually has enough magical potential to defeat the last couple of monsters and bring Danny back from the dead. (Possibly. :P) After this point she’d need a different costume and magical weapon and power (Maybe a different color scheme too) Let’s see, maybe she’d inherit Danny’s sonic powers or something? Like she uses both the headphones and hair pin- Wait! I just had an idea! To incorporate the bracelet idea into it! :P Basically Danny gifted her a bracelet when they were friends fighting the original monsters, a sort of friendship bracelet if you will. And basically after she realizes the true reason why she is continuing fighting the bracelet becomes her second magical object as it’s her last link to Danny. (With the exception of his headphones)

Now I just need to think of her new color scheme and what not. :P Let’s see. . . If her magical love powers derive from her love of Danny then maybe it has to do with love? Her powers I mean. I don’t want her to be too close to the original Magical Love Warriors though. :P So I might want to do something other than a pink color scheme. . . Hmm. . . I am trying to imagine a new costume design for her. :P But when I think of her magical powers being love I keep on adding hearts to her costume in my head. :P She might still be the black and purple costumed girl though.

Okay for her second costume, color scheme and hair/eye color I think I’ll go with the idea of her having pink eyes instead of purple, her main color would probably be white instead of black, and her magical colors would probably be white and red. This costume would probably be slightly more girly than the first one, although not as girly as the love warriors costume. :P Her new hair color might just stay being black, although I might change it to red or pink. Possibly just change it to brown to resemble a new outlook on life. :P

One of the reasons why she gains new powers is because she changes her outlook on life from being that she loved Danny and wants to bring him back at any cost necessary, to something more like “Since she loved Danny, she should continue on with her life” although at this point she still wants to bring Danny back. Either that or she unlocks her /full full/ powers after she fully accepts his death, and then only then she can bring Danny back. :P

Maybe the point of Agent Swift could be to get Annie to care for something else other than bringing back Danny, basically Swift could act as the trigger for her realizing that her love for Danny is stronger than her love for animals and thus it’s Swift’s reasoning that allowed Annie to unleash her new love powers.

If any of this doesn’t make sense which a lot of it probably doesn’t as a lot of this was thought up as my fingers hit the keys. :P So plot holes and contradictions are probably all over the place. Just try ask me a question and I’ll try to answer it. :P

Here are the names of the monsters for some reason I liked the German word for “Anger” so I decided to go with German words for all of their names, I might change it slightly that way it’s different, like a different spelling of something. :P I dunno just yet.

Denial - Ablehnung Anger - Zorn Bargain - Handel Depression (I might change depression to detachment actually that way for the opposite powers of love thing comes into play I don’t end up with the happiness dilemma.- Krise Acceptance - Die Annahme

Death/Demise - Ableben 