Thread:Benboy755/@comment-5482792-20150213113310/@comment-5238714-20150213205740

Hugh-Z wrote: Benboy,

I've been editing a few articles around here which you have been reverting. I do not seem to be the only editor having this problem as someone has spoke up about this before.

I'm not editing to spam or anything. Just mearly taking out the thousands of "he/she" in the articles and trading them for different words among other things (taking out accident doubled words).

Nearly all of the articles have every sentence starting with "he". You cannot deny that this is an extremely repetitive and doesn't make for a good read. Have a click around on the random page and you will see for yourself.

I understand you are a patroller and I'm not knocking you for doing your job. If there are any problems with my editing please post a comment as to why you have the problem so I understand where you are coming from. Now that I have given reason for these minor edits I hope you understand.

Cheers! I apologize for not coming to you sooner about this, my bad

Fixing the sentences so they don't start with "he/she" is perfectly fine. I support doing so. However, your particularly solution to this is...eh.. You just can't change some pronouns in an article to a different gender, for one. You've also been combining sentences and moving adverbs and prepositions, which honestly jumbles the articles more than it improves them.

I fully support editing this wiki, however, if you're going to do so, at least learn some English rules first. Also check out the MoS.

The first paragraph of an article should follow the following format:

 is a user who joined the LEGO Message Boards on, &lt;year&gt;.  currently has the rank  and over posts.  mainly posts in the.

Please, I encourage you to keep editing. Remove double words, confusing phrases, and the like. Also, I'd appreciate if you also updated post and likes counts while updating an article.

Thanks!