User blog comment:Ireithien/The Walking Jed - Chapter 3/@comment-4845243-20140228005456/@comment-5510093-20140228171101

I personally loved the interjection or whatever it's called, "The world had ended." It's simple and certainly accurately describes the way that Jed is feeling at that given time. It probably should have been put in italics though, to show it as a thought rather than a statement. A really good chapter, Jedil, I can't wait to read more!