User blog comment:Aravis Tarkheena/LMBWFF Part 11/@comment-5510093-20140312002835/@comment-25183068-20140312010948

Thanks, Dad, and yeah, what you said is all true. When I'm doing dialogue between multible characters, it always seems rather canned, and never really normal. It's either too stiff and forced, or too loose. I suppose with this story, it might be even worse because all I'm trying to do is get the information out there, and be mildly amusing in the process, so I don't bother working on nice little talks and all that stuff that really happens in real life. Same goes for description; I haven' been bothering with eloquency and details, because I'm not used to being able to have as much space to write as I want (for example, see the 2000 character limit on the MBs :P). So in this part, I tried to work on it a bit. And describing the pattern streetlights make in a car is something I always wanted to do.