User blog comment:Ireithien/The Walking Jed - Chapter 1/@comment-25183068-20140222180344

I don't particularly like the centred text, because your eye can't do the normal left-to-right and back again. But on the other hand, it's not really a big deal at all.

I get what you mean about not much happening; I've had a ton of those chapters to write.

And about the gore/inappropriate-ness, well, IMO the less there is, the better, but this is a zombie fic, for brick's sake. It's my job to stop reading if I don't like it. It is to be expected. You're doing just fine, keep on writing.