User blog comment:GuacamoleCCXR/Guac's LMBW fanfic story thing - CHAPTER 2/@comment-5112967-20140417001638

Good job. Enjoying it. THough one thing, LED is kind of confusing becuase the reader doesn't know its him until you say "I and my brother were a little slower to react"... It seemed like you had it in your mind but never put it down. :S