User blog comment:Aravis Tarkheena/LMBWFF Part 12/@comment-4552817-20140403224047

Aravis, you know I love your writing, but I found one teeny tiny mistake. :3 I just had to point it out. ...I think you forgot the word door in the following sentence, "The thick wooden-and-metal to the room swung open..." Btw, you did well with Obi's lines. And Jdude's character is fun too. :P