User blog:Packachoo/Obsession

What do you think of my poem, the one I'm writing for Alemas. <3

http://www.lovecalculator.com/love.php?name1=Packachoo&name2=Alemas

My obsession for Alemas is like diarrhea. I just can't hold it in.

It's also like a candle. If you ignore our love, I'll burn the house down.

My obsession for Alemas is like a river. You don't know how deep it is. You have to dive in and drown to find out.

My obsession for Alemas is like a circle: It's not straight and it never ends.

My obsession with Alemas knows no limits, not even gravity.

My obsession with Alemas is like a concave up function because it is always increasing.

It's also like an onion. It has layers of love.

My obsession for Alemas is like an alarm clock. He might throw it, but it will always be there the next morning, being annoying. <3

My obsession with Alemas is like pi. It has no end.

My obsession with him is bigger than my obsession of pie.

My obsession with him is bigger than my obsession with pizza.

My obsession with him is bigger than my obsession with pizza pie.

It's like a selfie. I'm addicted to it, and I'll never stop taking more.

My obsession with Alemas is like the Doctor's obsession with bowties.

Or fezs.

That, in and of itself, describes my obsession.

My obsession with Alemas is not like the Mos Eisley Cantina. It's a hive, full of love.

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Give me suggestions for the poem :D