User blog comment:Aravis Tarkheena/LMBWFF Part 11/@comment-5510093-20140312002835

Loved the whole thing, not only because Guacamilla is just so aweshum, but the writing, imagery and all that  I love your parts with Guac mainly because (constructive criticism coming up) you seem to be better at writing internal dialogue, people's thought processes and all that, than you are at writing actual dialogue between people. Maybe it's just a personal preference of mine, but I've noticed that since the first ones you did with just yourself. You're pretty good at comedy and sarcasm in character-to-character dialogue, but you might want to work on the other stuff ;)