User blog comment:GuacamoleCCXR/Guac's LMBW fanfic story thing - CHAPTER 2/@comment-25183068-20140416143154

I don't like this Major Jonas Rollins... he strikes me as a shady character at this point. I like that you started introducing more people now. I didn't spy any typos... and hurry up with the next chapter; I want to read more