User blog comment:Aravis Tarkheena/LMBWFF Part 13, feat. Defooster/@comment-4845243-20140408011729

Haven't finished it, but "hereon in" should be changed to "hereinafter". "Hereon" means the same thing as "hereupon', which is "after or as a result of this". "Hereinafter" means "further on in this document", and is, I think, what you mean to say.