Thread:AbbeAdventerous114/@comment-26425232-20160127225429

What the title said. Thought you could give me some suggestions and advice on my big Ninjago story project. It's about a character based off of me (a lot more epic than me, especially later on :P) I feel I need to alter the plot. So she (Lin/Breeze) is supposed to fight this evil warlord who took over her village. I originally had her smashing him, but I thought that was rather out of character for someone supposed to be like me. But I have this villain as Clouse's brother, and she needs to do [I] something [/I] to make Clouse against her so they can have a fight, so Zane can come in at the nick of time so he can rescue her, so they can have a lovely reunion scene :3. Your thoughts? 