User blog comment:LlamaMinister/WIP Chapter One of Several For a Potential Book/@comment-26944420-20160702004521/@comment-28423497-20160702010458

Gaffney is the thief everyone is referring to. This is pointed out when a market goer says "there he is" and points at Gaffney while the guards are looking for the thief. It is a heavily implied thing. This is all taking place in the market, which is also pointed out in the second sentence.

Ser is not misspelled. It is a medieval Latin term used to show honor and respect to those being talked to.

Velwood, Glendel, and Pilwhen are heavily implied to be town or city names, which is shown by Gaffney leaving the gates of Glendel, and by thinking about going to Velwood and Pilwhen, and even thinking about the last time he was at Pilwhen.

Everything else you said, yeah...I can improve that. This is only a first draft of this, after all. Thanks ^u^