User blog comment:GuacamoleCCXR/Guac's fanfic thing - CHAPTER 4/@comment-5112967-20140422181807

Yay! I got introduced into a story finally! :D Good chapter! Found a couple typos.

"I don’t know how the other guy is," who? and,

"by a mossy bolder of remarkably larger size" boulder?

But good job! Can't wait for the next chapter!