User blog comment:GuacamoleCCXR/Guac's fanfic thing - these titles are getting shorter with every chapter! - CHAPTER 3/@comment-5311834-20140418224044

Starscream was actually perfect. Only mistakes I noticed were...

"[...] but it apparently," Drop the "it".

“Well I wish this was case, but sadly, it isn’t." THE case.

"[...] have a ton of money to spent," *spend.

Other than that, best chapter, so far.