User blog comment:GuacamoleCCXR/Weird story fanfic thing I still need to find a name for some time in the future - CHAPTER 1/@comment-25183068-20140415193039

Dude, you can write. Aside from some quick switches to and from colloquial language that are a tiny bit uncomfortable (but very interesting), the writing quality is perfect. Each sentence is packed full of description, making it well worth turning off my music to read this and get the full impact. c: