User blog comment:Greenninjasgirlfriend/Ninjago adventures/@comment-4824135-20131031042924

Ima gonna be honest here.

This could use a bit of work.

Punctuation, bleh. Grammar, bleh. Might want to specify that this is after Garmadon became good again. Also, why do they discover a prince while playing paintball? There is no explanation of why this kid is hiding in a paintball field bush, and the backstory behind him is very confusing(mostly grammar, I get the gist of it.)